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[Samsquanch Quest]

= winnie the pooh punching another bear? He's got Balls of pooh.

After waiting for a good 7 minutes waiting for this to buffer, it was a show of awesome. The Direct dive into the story was magnificent, the amount of frames used was well spread out, and is some what convincing to be an actual feature, the perception and awareness of the characters was well done and so was the animation, however the animation itself, is a definition of crazy morphed shapes at times with both the face and body,this alone can considered deliberate for comedic uses, but at most time the face scale would be big in one scene and small in the next.
The direction and plot was adventurous, and that's what i love to see, having great fun with a story and playing around with it, the result always comes out surprising and always sparks of vitality for more future episodes.

kalabor106 responds:

Silly old bear...
Its out of control with the morph movement. Eventually I'll get that under control. Thanks

[Werebox the movie]

= "Now he is a ball with nothing to loose" Max Ball? Would definitly define he has "alot of Balls"
Unless your just busting my balls..

I don't know why, but those smiley's look familiar, usually from those smiley websites.
the presentation was cuddly and well done, but ehm....yeah they're just balls, so not much in the animating motives of movement can be established there, the sound quality was pretty good.
I didn't find the gags funny nor was the plot interesting either, your missing the one ingredient and that's humour.

NewStage responds:

What humor? It's a serious movie!

[TheTakeoffShow: Book]

= It pays to be patient, but it also pays to know the difference between running and sliding.

It's always good to see a half baked Tom and Jerry chase genre, but you got to know how to do it right,
It's aslo nice to hear younger voice actors, but at times the level of the wav volume is too loud,
The animation at times weren't bad either but then there where times it looked like it was rushed.
The direction of this was pretty clear and simple, however you will need to harness some humour if you really want me to laugh..

AnimationRules responds:

Okay. I'll keep a mental note of that.

[Maybellopf Clearvibrance]

= Guy looking in his late 40 with unshaven face for a job as a gum shoe? [Check]

Right off the bat you threw me into the world of what i didn't expect to see, if there's anything that inspires me more its noire styled genres, they are classical memories that should never be neglected because of the limit of the colour, The animation was very good, the sense of direction was perfect, such include motive and camera perception like the scene in the kitchen and the fan light that seems to be within a slight range, the voice acting is ok, and could of been done better,

You also made it clear that this was intended for a commercial use, Strangely i think it was too long for one, but that's shown potential.

PapaLongLegs responds:

Thanks!

It started as a much longer (less narrated) short film but I had to squeeze it into a commercial, which come in 15 second iterations. That might explain the length. Either way thank you I appreciate a well planned review!

[Samurai Fly Teaser]

= I guess they call it a "Teaser" for a reason.

Seems to look promising, my assumption is that this will be an action adventure, The animation Templates are pretty good, but nothing makes sense, even for a trailer, if there were other sprites involved it would of sparked more curiosity for the viewer.
I look forward to seeing the final product.

Rezeile responds:

Thats a great response ...I was trying to get a feeling for the overall world at first...now I can add in some new animation for th final...Thanks!!:)

[Shadow Tells a Joke]

This was pretty funny, and i like sonic.
The animation isn't that great, the Direction was pretty well presented and it was simple, maybe next time you can make humour better, it's still pretty good, you captured the style pretty well too, the voice acting is not bad either.

SickLilMonkey responds:

Thanks. Yeah, I'm still getting the hang of animating...and writing. I knew I was taking a chance seeing as how there's so many talented folks here, but I will work on getting better.

[MBR Vs Philbert]

This was enjoyable, the fight coordination was excellent you have a good eye for direction.
These aren't your sprites,and i am familiar with this pixel art.
The animation is was you would expect from the sprite resource you were using,however excellent quality, the ending could of been wrapped up better, and you definitely put alot of effort in it.

FurryZA responds:

Thankyou! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And... what do you mean they're not my sprites? I created them all myself, (The gray wolf with the tail, at least.) Would you mind telling me where you found it from before?

And the Sprite resouce, It was someone else's sprite (The guy with the purple/black hair, his name was Philbert, he is NOT mine. The Gray wolf (Kitty look like to some people) is mine, all sprited from templates, but he is in fact my character.)

And, the ending, which one, the extra scene or the one where I ran to go get something to eat? The extra scene (Just to clarify) was just a deleted scene I added at the end to give one final laugh after the fight, you know, to keep the audience smiling.

I'm glad you commented, more to come later!