Pretty well done, you have potential.
Pretty well done, you have potential.
Thank you, fine sir
not bad i wsh it was longer
I hate you because i was laughing hard at this, and i was trying not to....I mean really?
The music was funny and the way carried the whole tomatoes gimmick was just genius.
So yeah you got me lol..
Good job
Nice sense of humour i'll keep this trailer noted.
i think ill choose Pivee.. lol
Wow! such potential, you have made without a doubt the best animated feature i've seen on here!
Flawless !
I think this was incredibly annoying, i had to spam myself to click to play the movie, which got me frustrated, with that causes some problems because most people, (and i'm afraid i'm one of them) will want to sit back and watch....Not Click Click click Click click....
The other problem is that some viewers tend to be "arrogant" when it comes down to "Reading" dialogues which was obviously important to the plot, the only dialogues that most will approve of is that of the introduction and the Credits.. Your Title description "MS12Ds" is like a child's way of saying "you have to know what that means" you need to make it perfectly clear what it is your showing,
For all we know it could mean something to fix my shoes with,,
Obviously these aren't your sprites either, so we will let that pass, you had some good ideas with camera control and action scenes which is always nice, i approve of anything that has an action potential added in their story, there is always room for improvement, and i wish you the best of luck.
Sorry for the inconvenience. (and for the first reply if you read that at all)
If you were talking about how the movie stops every time a text box pops up you should have been able to press the space bar to continue through the text.
And if people can't read they don't have to like this. I didn't want to have voice actors in this animation series because it was inconvenient.
Thank You for all of the Constructive Criticism.
And the episode has credits to show who made the sprites.
This was Fricking awesome, too bad you had to swear to me thats a sign of plotting interest, and would not appeal to a younger audience, like my daughter and son.
I just love the look of the characters, it takes me back to my childhood on Nickelodeon's Ren and Stimpy lol i could tell, and that's why i love it!
Animation was Decent and can improve.
Good job
Thanks, man it was more for the nostalgic kids from the 90s. Although the song is by the Red Hot Chili Peppers from 1995.
This was Weird...The Music is Awefull, things are happening too fast, for me to understand whats going on. Yes i get that they are hikers, but relating to your description an AD for a walking stick, didn't give me that impression it was an advert if there is no promoting narration, nor any direction..
Good Colour quality and character design, but limited animation..
All in all not bad but great either..
You're right. I must learn to control the time and the narrative!!
Thank you so much!!!
This is good if People have played mass effect, otherwise people like myself wont get joke...
What you forgot was to give a background of what is happening, otherwise too much on a plate can over kill the plot, considering these are a bundle of sketches, the ending was incredibly lazy.
The animation is nothing special but its good to see colour, good capturing with the characters as well, i didn't like the voice acting, if its meant to be comedic, more effort could of been put into it to grasp a sense of humour, so it doesn't sound like you..
All in all its ok..
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